HALLOWEEN-THE
DOCTOR
Chapter 1.
Melissa Cramer was walking down
the hall in her candy striper uniform.
She was looking for Dr. Michelle Carter.
Melissa was a high school junior. She attended St. Mary’s Catholic
school for young women where she had been since starting in the sixth grade. Besides being on the volleyball team and a
member in many clubs, Melissa volunteered at the local hospital a couple of
afternoons every week.
Dr. Carter, or Shelly to her
friends, was Melissa’s idol. She was a
young good looking female doctor.
Melissa wanted to be just like her.
Shelly had warmed to Melissa when they met a few months ago. They shared coffee and Shelly offered advice
on what Melissa needed to do if she wanted to go to medical school. Dr. Carter was a good person and she got a
lot of satisfaction from trying to help another woman get ahead in the medical
profession.
Michelle Carter didn’t have a
lot of friends in town. She grew up in
the Midwest and attended medical school in Chicago .
She was now doing her rotation at the Cleveland Clinic.
With the hectic life of a
resident, she had little time to socialize or meet new friends. Therefore, the majority of her acquaintances were
people she met at the hospital.
Today was Halloween. Several of the residents were going out to a
party after their shift ended. There was
going to be a costume contest. Michelle
was not really sure about what costume to wear.
During one of their breaks, Melissa suggested that Michelle could borrow
one of her old school uniforms. They
apprised each other and Melissa pointed out to Michelle that Michelle was
actually a little smaller than Melissa.
Therefore it would be easy to find a uniform that would realistically
fit Michelle.
Eventually, it was agreed that
Melissa would provide Michelle with a full regulation St. Mary’s School
Uniform.
***
Melissa spotted Dr. Carter
walking down the hall. “Shelly, I have
your school uniform.” She animatedly pointed at the bag in her hands.
Michelle brought her finger to
her mouth and looked around, “SHhh! I
don’t want anyone to know.”
Michelle gestured with her arms
up and down around her lab coat. “I’m a
doctor, you know.” Michelle winked at
Melissa and both women laughed and giggled at their secret.
Michelle said, “Let’s go get a
soda and talk about your Halloween plans. What are you going to be for
Halloween?”
Melissa and she walked together
down the hall. Michelle took the bag
from Melissa. As they were walking away,
she reached around the corner of the nurse’s station and placed the bag under
the counter. There was no one at the
station at the moment.
Chapter 2.
Nurse Hawkins was having a bad
week. Hospital rotations for interns were
changing again and that always meant additional work for the nurses. It was amazing how these residents who were
mostly just young kids thought so highly of themselves. The nurses ended up training these kids so
they could go on to become rich doctors while the nurses had to do all the real
work. Often the nurses had to do the
doctor’s jobs too.
Nurse Hawkins worked the
children’s wing dealing mostly with children of grade school age through early
teens. This particular floor was for
patients recovering from surgery. She
had just finished changing the bed linens on one patient’s bed and was moving
to the door when she noticed two people down the hall.
She heard the one in the candy
striper uniform say that she had the other person’s school uniform. This caught her off guard because at first
she thought the other female was a resident based on her clothing.
Then she heard them mention
Halloween. Of course, she thought. Today is Halloween. Her friend was dressed up as a doctor for
Halloween. That made much more
sense. The one dressed in the doctor’s
getup was smaller than the other girl.
She watched as they walked down
the hall. She noticed Michelle placing
her bag at the nurse’s station.
Hawkins strode to the nurse’s
station and pulled out the bag. She
opened the bag and pulled out the uniform jumper. She recognized it as belonging to St. Mary’s,
a local catholic all girls’ school.
Obviously, that girl was a
volunteer here. While the costume was
cute and very realistic, she would have to suggest that she wear her candy
striper uniform inside the hospital to avoid anyone mistaking her for a real
doctor.
Chapter 3.
The two girls were sitting at a
table in the cafeteria.
“So Shelly, do you think you
will win the contest for best costume?” Melissa inquired.
“I don’t know. But, if I can fit into the uniform you
brought, at least I won’t be embarrassed by not participating. I’m really more worried about just meeting
some new people.” Michelle was kind of
looking off into the air as she spoke.
“Well you have a friend in
me. I am so excited. You have really helped me define the
direction for my life. I love that you
are a confident doctor and someone I can try to model my life after. Maybe someday we can work together.”
“Well I think it will be a few
years before we can work together. Let’s
work on getting you into a good school.”
They sat for a moment or two.
Michelle stood up. “I am starting my rotation on the children’s
wing tomorrow and I want to make a good impression. You know how those nurses can be. They think they do all the work and the
doctors are useless. I am trying to get
the feel of the department today.”
Melissa responded, “I hear that
there is a Nurse Hawkins up there. Get
on her good side and do whatever she says.
You should sail through your time on her ward.”
Michelle returned to the
children’s wing. She really didn’t need
to be here today. They had a day off
between rotations. Her new rotation
assignments started tomorrow. She always
liked to take a look around ahead of time if she got the chance.
Michelle was wearing blue scrubs
and a white lab coat. Her name tag was
on the breast pocket, Dr. Michelle Carter.
She was really proud of that tag.
It seemed like a stamp of approval for all her hard work over the last
few years. She was wearing 2 ½ inch
heels today since she was not really working yet. She liked to wear heels whenever possible
because she was naturally short at only a little over 5 feet tall. Even her white work shoes were a style of
tennis shoe that had a heel. It was sort
of hidden in the design of the shoe.
Michelle saw a nurse at the
nurse’s station and decided to introduce herself.
***
Nurse Hawkins noticed the return
of the girl in the doctor outfit.
“Hi, I’m Michelle Carter I’ll be
working up here with you starting tomorrow.
I just wanted to introduce myself.”
Nurse Hawkins was sizing this
young lady up. “I’m Nurse Hawkins. It’s nice to meet you.” She paused.
“If you don’t mind my asking, don’t you think the heels are a little out
of place for a doctor’s outfit?”
Michelle was caught off
guard. This was the nurse she had been
told about. She did not want to start
things off on the wrong foot. “I guess I
should have worn my white soft soled shoes.
That would probably be more normal; right?”
“Yes that would be more
appropriate. How can I help you?” Nurse Hawkins hated wasting time with these
kids.
“I just wanted to look around
and familiarize myself with the floor so I’d be more prepared tomorrow.
Nurse Hawkins thought maybe this
one is trying a bit too hard. “That’s
alright. But, don’t cause me any
trouble.”
Michelle felt like a kid getting
dressed down by the teacher. She said,
“I’ll just look things over and head out.
I have plans for later.”
Yes, thought Nurse Hawkins. I know about your secret contest. She also thought the nametag was a nice
touch. It gave a sense of realism to the
costume. She did sort of look like a
doctor.
She looked at Michelle and said
firmly, “Carry on, I have work to do.”
Michelle turned away feeling
like a chastised child. As she thought
about it, she realized this was a problem.
One of the key lessons doctors learn is that they have to earn and
demand respect from the nursing staff.
For women, this is harder than for men.
As she walked away, Michelle began to think about how she was going to
change her relationship with this Nurse Hawkins.
Chapter 4.
Nurse Hawkins kept an eye on her
new candy striper. She was looking in a
few of the rooms. She said ‘Hi’ to a
couple of the kids who were patients. It
looked like she might be a good addition to the group.
A little later as Nurse Hawkins
was leaving a patient room, she noticed Shelly walking into the nurse’s
station. It might be time to lay out the
limits of Shelly’s new role.
As Nurse Hawkins entered the
Nurse’s area she called, “Miss Carter, could I have a word?”
“Of course, Mrs. Hawkins.”
Michelle replied.
“First of all, my name is Nurse
Hawkins. It is not Mrs. Hawkins. I
demand respect from everyone I work with.
I have earned it. Second, when
you want something from me you ask. You
will use please and thank you. You ask
to come into the nursing area. There
will usually be more nurses around. This
is our office. Not yours.”
Michelle felt that she was being
put down again. She nodded to the
instruction, but was trying to figure out a polite way to change their
relationship. At this moment, it felt
like it was going in the wrong direction.
Nurse Hawkins continued, “You do
not go through our things or look into private patient information. There are laws regarding patient privacy and
we take that very seriously at this hospital.
Do you understand?”
Michelle was stunned and quickly
responded, “Yeah I get it.”
Nurse Hawkins voice stepped up
in force as she took a deep breath, “You will talk to me with respect. No Yeahs
or Nahs. You will respond; Yes, Nurse
Hawkins I understand. Now DO YOU
UNDERSTAND?”
Michelle was intimidated. This
woman was bigger than her and she seemed really mad all of a sudden. Michelle stammered, “Yes Nurse Hawkins, I
understand. I am sorry I did not respond
in a respectful way.”
Nurse Hawkins appraised
Michelle, “That is better. Now finish up
your tour and let me get back to work.”
Michelle felt like she was losing
control. She needed to figure out a way
to reassert herself. She went into the
bathroom to think for a minute.
Chapter 5.
Michelle decided that forcing a
confrontation today would be a bad idea.
She would continue her tour of the department and get out of here so she
could go to the party.
Michelle went into the nurse’s
station and read a couple of the charts.
She selected a patient and Michelle went into one of the rooms and
talked with the child and her mother.
She introduced herself and asked a few questions. She tried to provide some reassurance to the
little girl and moved on to the next room.
Nurse Hawkins saw Michelle leave
the nurse’s station and walk to one of the rooms down the hall. She was talking to the patient and her
family. At first, Nurse Hawkins thought
that was really nice.
Suddenly, she stopped. That girl is dressed like a doctor. She has a doctor name badge. What kind of game is she playing with these
troubled families? Hawkins was worried
now. She had to figure out what this
little minx was up to.
Nurse Hawkins walked down the
hall and sidled up to the door outside of the room where Michelle was talking
to a family.
Nurse Hawkins heard Michelle
telling the family that she had read their chart and that their daughter seemed
to be progressing well. She said she
would have more involvement in their case in the coming days.
Nurse Hawkins could not believe
this. In all the years she had worked
here, she had never had one of the child volunteers take their fantasies this
far. She was misleading this family into
believing that she was an actual doctor.
The new Doctors were enough like kids.
But having a real kid trying to be a doctor was ridiculous.
As Nurse Hawkins considered her
new round of doctors and this little trouble maker, her anger quickly grew out
of control. She needed to get this
problem under control immediately. As
she fumed, Michelle seemed to end her supposed consultation and moved to exit
the room.
Nurse Hawkins grabbed Michelle’s
arm and said, “We need to talk; right Now!”
***
Michelle was ending her
consultation and she felt she had connected with the mother and her
daughter. As she was leaving the room,
Nurse Hawkins grabbed her arm and said they heeded to talk. Michelle was caught off guard. She was being dragged toward the nurse’s
station.
“What? OK.” Michelle
tried to pull her arm free and walk.
But, the nurse held her arm in an iron grip. She was almost dragged into the back of the
nurse’s station.
Nurse Hawkins anger was
seething. She was thinking about the inexperienced
young doctors. She was thinking about
this crazy girl. Her anger was turning
to rage. And, her mind and her anger
were totally focused on Michelle.
Suddenly, the nurse stopped and
spun Michelle around. They were looking
at each other. Nurse Hawkins was much
larger than Michelle. Michelle was
looking up at the nurse.
Michelle began to feel a little
like a kid ready to be corrected. She
quickly realized that she needed to change their relationship. This nurse needed to be put in her place.
Nurse Hawkins was having similar
thoughts. She believed it was time to
put Michelle in her place.
Firmly, Nurse Hawkins began,
“Let’s get something straight. Today,
you are not a doctor working on this floor.”
Michelle thought it was a
technicality. But she realized she would
not officially be working on this floor until tomorrow. She nodded.
Nurse Hawkins continued, “You
said you wanted to look around. But you
have been in private areas behind the nurse’s station and I have no idea what
you have gotten into. Then I heard you
talking to the patients. I need you to
empty your pockets.”
Michelle was caught off
guard. “What? My Pockets?”
Feeling indignant, Michelle tried to step back, hitting a wall. “I will not.
Who do you think you are?”
The nurse had positioned her so
that her back was to a wall. There was
no escape. Michelle tried to move away
and hit the wall.
Nurse Hawkins had a smile on her
face. Or, was it a sneer?
“Young lady, it is time we got
some things straight. I am the person in
charge around here. Not you. Empty your pockets or I will.”
Michelle began to try to escape.
Nurse Hawkins grabbed her.
“I guess we’ll do this the hard
way. I need to verify that you have not
taken anything from the nurse’s station.
You have been in and out of here and there are drugs and other things
back here.”
Michelle reacted strongly. “Let me go of you fucking bitch. No one is gong to … Oww.”
Nurse Hawkins slapped Michelle. Her reaction was instinctual. It was an unexpected reaction to the young
lady cussing at her. “No one talks to me
that way.”
Michelle was dragged over to a
sink. It was clear the nurse was really mad.
As she was trying to get her thoughts together, Nurse Hawkins shoved a
wet bar of soap into her mouth. She
scrubbed it back and forth across her teeth generating shavings and soap
bubbles. The bar was then pushed into
her mouth.
“Don’t you dare take that soap
out of your mouth? I am so sick and
tired of the insulting way youngsters talk to me. How dare you talk to me like that?” Nurse Hawkins was holding Michelle’s hands in
front of her.
Michelle was flailing. She was trying to get her hands up to her
mouth. She was gagging on the soap and
trying to figure out how things had gotten out of hand. The soap was wedged onto her teeth and her
tongue was held down by the bar. She
could not move the bar of soap without her hands since her tongue was
stuck. Instead, she was sucking on the
pungent bar of soap. Her tongue was
watering and increasing the effect of the soap.
Michelle suddenly felt her lab
coat being pulled over her head from the back.
As this occurred, the nurse pulled it over her head but did not let her
arms out of the sleeves. Instead, she
wrapped the coat around Michelle’s arms.
This made it easier for Nurse Hawkins to control her arms.
Nurse Hawkins sat down in a hard
backed chair near the desk.
Michelle’s muffled cries were
quieted by the bar of soap in her mouth.
“Now little missy, it is time we
got back to figuring out what your game is.
As I said, I need to make sure you have not stolen anything or gotten
into things you should not. Since you
refused to empty your pockets like a good girl, I will search you myself.”
The nurse positioned Michelle
standing next to her leg and held onto her arms with one arm. With that, the nurse used her free hand to
reach behind Michelle and whisked down the scrub pants to below her knees. Michelle’s eyes went wide as she again began
to thrash around.
Nurse Hawkins pulled Michelle
across her lap and pushed her bundled arms under her far leg. She then gave Michelle two very hard swats
across her butt.
“That is enough of that.” She
said firmly. “I will finish searching you and then we will make sure that you
and I have a firm understanding of our relationship.”
With that Michelle’s pants were
pulled off her flailing legs. The nurse
leaned on Michelle’s arms with her legs and held her on her lap with one of her
arms. She used the other arm to dump the
contents of Michelle’s pockets onto the floor.
“Well nothing there in your
pants pockets.”
Nurse Hawkins noticed Michelle’s
small silky panties adorned with lace on the legs. Why do children have to wear such slutty cloths? They certainly afforded no protection from
the previous swats. However, Nurse
Hawkins was in a position to try and straighten this young lady out, she might
as well start from the inside.
“This slutty underwear is
inappropriate for working around my hospital.
From this day forward, I will whenever I see fit, inspect your
underwear. You will wear regulation
underwear similar to that allowed with any good school uniform. If I find you wearing something like this in
the future, you can expect another correction session.”
Michelle felt her underwear
being removed and again tried to scream.
Her hands were locked down. She
was swallowing and eating a bar of soap and some crazy woman was stripping her.
“Now, I think it is time for us
to come to an understanding regarding our relationship. Don’t you agree?”
Michelle nodded thinking this
would give her a chance to explain who she was.
However, Michelle was wrong.
Nurse Hawkins adjusted Michelle’s
position on her lap and began to beat a pattern onto her bottom. She varied location and switched cheeks
regularly.
Michelle was stunned as the
spanking began. No discussion. No explanation. Suddenly, she was being spanked. Not
playfully. This woman was serious. The pain quickly passed her ability to
control. She was trying to get off of
the nurse’s lap. She was trying to
scream. But, she was quickly crying
uncontrollably. Her tears were streaming
and her sobs were real. She was still
inhaling the soap but due to the pain, she was almost oblivious. Michelle felt like a little child being
spanked. Her mind was a blur.
Nurse Hawkins made sure her
blows hit Michelle’s taught rear end, her thighs and her inner thighs
throughout the spanking. Everything was
beginning to glow in a nice shade of red.
There were clear finger or hand patterns. Nurse Hawkins was getting all of her
aggression out of her system. She was
going to straighten out this child who was trying to pretend to be a doctor on
her floor if it was the last thing she did today.
Michelle was in a cloud. She was being punished. She would do almost anything to get it to
stop. Her entire focus was on stopping
the pain.
As Nurse Hawkins paused, she
asked Shelley if she was going to be a good girl.
Michelle with no other option
nodded and continued to cry. She looked
pleadingly up at the nurse. The truth
was Michelle still did not know what it was that she had done wrong. But she felt reality slipping away. She wanted to do whatever this woman
wanted. She was putty in the nurse’s
hands.
Michelle was breathing hard and
heaving. Her eyes and cheeks were red
and puffy.
Nurse Hawkins explained. “Now Shelley, I’ll pause and we will see if
you intend do be good. Stand up here a
minute so I can get you unwrapped from this coat.”
Michelle was still crying as
Nurse Hawkins unwrapped her arms and pulled the coat free. She set the coat aside and began to pull the
scrub top over Michelle’s head. Michelle
began to balk, but a few quick swats got her to give in. Michelle suddenly realized she was bare below
the waist and moved to cover herself.
“Oh and of course we have to
have the slutty bra to match the previously discussed underwear.”
As Michelle looked quizzically
at Nurse Hawkins, Her bra was unceremoniously unhooked and removed.
Chapter 6.
As Michelle covered her small
breasts with one arm, Nurse Hawkins commented, “Why must you young ladies
always try to build up what God gave you.”
Nurse Hawkins held Michelle by
arms up near the shoulders. She looked
into her eyes. “As you get older, your
body will develop. But I will not have
you wearing these slutty clothes on my floor.
While you are working in my hospital, you will wear appropriate
clothing. You will not try to excite my patients, especially not young kids on
this wing. Do you understand?”
Michelle covering her chest and
crotch while sucking on the soap in her mouth just nodded.
“So from now on Shelley, you can
wear a bra sized for your chest or just a camisole. You don’t really need a bra. You can wear that along with your uniform
underwear. I would think the school
uniform regulations would include such requirements.”
Michelle did not understand this
discussion of the school uniform.
Nurse Hawkins reached under the
counter and pulled out the bag with the school uniform in it. Dumping the contents on the desk, she found a
pair of thick cotton child’s panties and a white camisole with Barbie on
it.
“Ah, you see. From now on, you will only wear underwear
like this.”
Michelle raised her
eyebrows. She tried to mumble
‘What’. It came out as “whuu”?
“Listen carefully Shelley. I am in charge here. You and I are coming to an
understanding. I will not allow you to
wear slutty underwear when working in my area of the hospital. So any time I see you, I may just pull you
into a corner to check your underwear.
Do you understand young lady?”
Michelle tentatively
nodded. She understood the directions. But did not understand why this was
happening. She was sure that as soon as
she could explain herself to this maniac, things would be better.
The nurse held out the panties
for Michelle to step into. Michelle
slowly stepped into the panties. Nurse
Hawkins pulled the child’s underwear up and allowed the waistband to snap high
up on Michelle’s waist.
Nurse Hawkins swiftly pulled the
camisole over Michelle’s head. It fit
her chest firmly and compressed what little chest she had. Michelle looked down at her nearly
non-existent chest and was ashamed of her lack of womanly assets. Why was this crazy woman doing this to her?
As Michelle was pondering her
situation, Nurse Hawkins tucked her camisole into the top of her panties, like
he mom did when she was in grade school.
And just as quickly, Nurse Hawkins was slipping her arms into the white
blouse for the uniform. The blouse fit
but surprisingly was not loose. It
seemed made for Michelle. A small
uniform necktie was tied around the neck of the shirt.
Nurse Hawkins slipped off Michelle’s
socks and replaced them with small white anklets. She then tied on the classic leather
brogues.
Nurse Hawkins held up the plaid
jumper style dress. “Ah, I love the
classic uniform of St. Mary’s school for girls.
I thought you would be wearing the skirt for the girls 7th
grade and above. But the classic lower
school uniform is much more traditional.”
As Nurse Hawkins slipped the
dress over her head, Michelle was trying to digest that the uniform she was
wearing was for the St. Mary’s grade school students. And worse yet, everything fit perfectly.
Nurse Hawkins pulled Michelle
into the bathroom.
“Now I am going to remove that
soap from your mouth. Your lips and
mouth will be a little numb from the long sucking on the soap. I expect that your words will be tempered
following our discipline and discussion.
Will you behave?”
Michelle nodded.
The Nurse pulled the soap out of
her mouth and handed her a paper cup. Michelle
filled up the cop and rinsed her mouth out several times.
As Michelle paused, she looked
in the mirror. She saw a young girl with
puffy eyes, red cheeks and swollen lips.
Her tongue was swollen making it hard to form words. She looked like a kid that had been crying
for an extended period of time. She
thought that was probably what should have been expected given the last few
minutes.
Nurse Hawkins put a small beret
cap on Michelle’s head.
“Come along dear.”
Michelle tried to pull back. Her words were garbled because her mouth was
swollen from the soap, “Can we thalk?”
Chapter 7.
“No we can not. I am done with you today. You have disrupted my routine enough for one
day. I am through with you.” Nurse Hawkins looked Michelle in the eye and
asked, “You were planning to go to a party, right?”
“Wewll, yeth. But…”
“No buts. I have decided that instead of going in your
doctor outfit, you will be a well disciplined student for Halloween.” Then she added sternly, “NO BACK TALK.”
As Nurse Hawkins led Michelle
down the hall, she stopped outside the patient’s room Michelle had visited
earlier.
She looked Michelle in the eye
and said, “First, we need to straighten this family out.”
Michelle was not sure what she
meant. She was feeling like a kid being
paraded out for an apology. But she did
not understand. “Wha do ewe mean. I
…”
She was cut off by a swat to her
bottom. The pain was intense and she
tried to jump away.
“Oh No you don’t.”
Nurse Hawkins pulled Dr.
Michelle Carter into the patient’s room.
Michelle remembered having a good conversation with them earlier. She hoped they had not heard what went on at
the nurse’s station. She was a bit
embarrassed by her attire and tried to sort of hide behind the nurse.
Nurse Hawkins began, “I want to
apologize to you. Today is Halloween and
Shelley here was all decked out in her little doctor uniform and I fear that
she let her fantasy go a little far with you earlier. We decided that a disciplined student was a
better outfit for Halloween. Shelley,
tell this family you are sorry for misleading them earlier.”
Michelle was stunned. She was not Shelley. She tried to explain, “Newse, Hawkwins, wha
are ewe saying? Ewe are ….” Shelley’s words sounded like she was
blubbering due to her swollen tongue and lips.
She sounded ridiculous.
Nurse Hawkins grabbed Shelley’s
ear with one hand, twisting and pulling her up in front of the family. She then delivered two quick swats to
Shelley’s hind quarters.
“You will apologize young
lady. Now! Or should we go back to my office?”
“Noo.” Michelle was devolving into the student she
appeared to be. She was scared to death
of a repeat of the spanking. She decided
to apologize and get out of here.
“I’n Sowwy. I won’t do it again. Pwease fowgive me.” As Shelley, for that was who she was now,
said the words, she felt she was losing any authority she may have had. How would she work with these people or this
nurse in the future?
Nurse Hawkins looked at the
family.
“I guess we accept the
apology. But how can a hospital allow
this to happen? I want to talk to
someone about this tomorrow. Get her out
of here.” The mother turned to her
daughter.
Nurse Hawkins, still holding her
ear, dragged her out into the hall.
She stopped and looked at
Shelley. “Now Shelley, do we understand
each other? I don’t care how long you
work her at my hospital. You will wear
the clothing we discussed as a reminder of today’s failures. Got it?”
With her head lowered, she said,
“Yeth. I undewstant” My God, she thought I sound like a little
kid. She just wanted out of this place.
Nurse Hawkins saw Melissa Carter
down the hall.
“Miss Carter, please come here.”
Melissa saw Nurse Hawkins
standing with a kid from the St. Mary’s Grade School. She walked quickly down the hall.
“Miss Carter, your young friend
Shelley has decided to go out for Halloween as a well disciplined child instead
of as a slutty doctor. Please take
charge of her and deliver her to either the party or her parents. I am done with her.”
Melissa stood open mouthed. She stared at the little girl who appeared to
be in sixth or seventh grade. No, Sixth
at most; or maybe fifth. She has no
chest and is puny.
She took Shelley’s hand and
started walking down the hall. Shelley
was crying and Melissa put her arm around her.
As she looked over Shelley’s shoulder she could see the marks on
Shelley’s legs where she had been disciplined.
Melissa wondered how she could
have let herself be taken in by this person.
She had idolized her. She led the
well spanked little girl down the hall.
Epilogue
The only thing Shelley knew was
that when she went to work she would be wearing the regulation panties and
camisole dictated by Nurse Hawkins. Her
big girl clothes might not really fit, but rules were rules. Hopefully she could avoid another spanking.
Shelley left the hospital with
Melissa. Until they were in Melissa’s
car, Shelley did not realize that she did not have her purse, keys or any identification.
Without keys or id and with
Melissa feeling betrayed, Halloween night was a disaster. But that was another story.
I love this story so much. Is there a sequel?
ReplyDeleteAmong your shorter works, I consider this as the most perfect/complete.
ReplyDeleteC. Lakewood once commented about Joe Doe's stories -
"The pacing, the paragraphing, the twists and turns (sometimes surprising and often humorous), the tidy but "open" endings are all worthy of study."
But the quote goes surprisingly well with this story and cannot be better described in one sentence. And I always wondered how the night went for Shelly.
Anyway, I recently found that there was a sequel on the process (mentioned by you) and it has been 5 years since then. Any chance that the sequel is ready and we can read it?
This is my email - 01asif02habib@gmail.com; if you want to drop a line. All the best.
I began a sequel but never got terribly far. I loved the way the story left her future open to imagination and I worried that by trapping her into my own that it would take away some of the fun others saw in it. While I may do more with it, it is not a near term project.
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ReplyDeleteI know the blog is defunct, but I just love this story and had to say so.
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