Writing and Questions.
I have an odd writing style.
I have at least 5-10 story ideas in process.
I have real life.
Some of my in process stories are a mere 2-5 pages.
One is over 100 pages if printed on normal paper.
I have 2 other stories which may be done in the near future.
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I know the feeling... I have maybe fifteen to thirty stories unfinished, some just a few pages, some many tens of thousands of words. Finding which one to finish, or start a new one, is a challenge however.
ReplyDeleteSame here, too many ideas, some fleshed out, others barely more than a scene or two, and no idea what to do next.
ReplyDeleteI really like "Do Clothes (Un)Make the Woman?" and the "The Principal or Principles". I like seeing the slow progression, as a snobbish adult woman and a dominant cocky girl change clothes, makeup, etc. and the slow regression and exchange of roles.
ReplyDeleteId like to see more of that. In "The Principal or Principles", there was just a very brief interaction with the girls who end up babysit their principle. And in "Do Clothes (Un)Make the Woman?" the child was caring for the mother, but I find it was only brief moments. Id like to see more of this. Along with perhaps some spankings, diaper change and others around seeing the former schoolgirl as the guardian and older girl as the child, without question the roles (and with the older girl squirming or uncomfortable).
themes I like include also the older girl being bullied by her "peers", who are bigger and stronger, yet just kids, perhaps a playdate of her spank or wrestle her and she struggles yet loses. Maybe she becomes the 7th grade bully's personal bitch/slave and cries to the teacher/her guardian (who is also younger than her). even better if she used to babysit and was mean to this playdate/bully... later of course the bully finds out the identity of her prey and the mocking gets worst!
I really like to see the former authority figure (principal, teacher, mother, etc) really immersed in the kid's world, as it becomes her new reality!