Sunday, June 30, 2013

HALLOWEEN - THE DOCTOR

HALLOWEEN-THE DOCTOR

Chapter 1.

Melissa Cramer was walking down the hall in her candy striper uniform.  She was looking for Dr. Michelle Carter.  Melissa was a high school junior. She attended St. Mary’s Catholic school for young women where she had been since starting in the sixth grade.  Besides being on the volleyball team and a member in many clubs, Melissa volunteered at the local hospital a couple of afternoons every week. 
Dr. Carter, or Shelly to her friends, was Melissa’s idol.  She was a young good looking female doctor.  Melissa wanted to be just like her.  Shelly had warmed to Melissa when they met a few months ago.  They shared coffee and Shelly offered advice on what Melissa needed to do if she wanted to go to medical school.  Dr. Carter was a good person and she got a lot of satisfaction from trying to help another woman get ahead in the medical profession. 
Michelle Carter didn’t have a lot of friends in town.  She grew up in the Midwest and attended medical school in Chicago.  She was now doing her rotation at the Cleveland Clinic. 
With the hectic life of a resident, she had little time to socialize or meet new friends.  Therefore, the majority of her acquaintances were people she met at the hospital. 
Today was Halloween.  Several of the residents were going out to a party after their shift ended.  There was going to be a costume contest.  Michelle was not really sure about what costume to wear.  During one of their breaks, Melissa suggested that Michelle could borrow one of her old school uniforms.  They apprised each other and Melissa pointed out to Michelle that Michelle was actually a little smaller than Melissa.  Therefore it would be easy to find a uniform that would realistically fit Michelle.
Eventually, it was agreed that Melissa would provide Michelle with a full regulation St. Mary’s School Uniform. 
***
Melissa spotted Dr. Carter walking down the hall.  “Shelly, I have your school uniform.” She animatedly pointed at the bag in her hands.
Michelle brought her finger to her mouth and looked around, “SHhh!  I don’t want anyone to know.”
Michelle gestured with her arms up and down around her lab coat.  “I’m a doctor, you know.”  Michelle winked at Melissa and both women laughed and giggled at their secret.
Michelle said, “Let’s go get a soda and talk about your Halloween plans. What are you going to be for Halloween?”
Melissa and she walked together down the hall.  Michelle took the bag from Melissa.  As they were walking away, she reached around the corner of the nurse’s station and placed the bag under the counter.  There was no one at the station at the moment.

Chapter 2.

Nurse Hawkins was having a bad week.  Hospital rotations for interns were changing again and that always meant additional work for the nurses.  It was amazing how these residents who were mostly just young kids thought so highly of themselves.  The nurses ended up training these kids so they could go on to become rich doctors while the nurses had to do all the real work.  Often the nurses had to do the doctor’s jobs too.
Nurse Hawkins worked the children’s wing dealing mostly with children of grade school age through early teens.  This particular floor was for patients recovering from surgery.  She had just finished changing the bed linens on one patient’s bed and was moving to the door when she noticed two people down the hall. 
She heard the one in the candy striper uniform say that she had the other person’s school uniform.  This caught her off guard because at first she thought the other female was a resident based on her clothing. 
Then she heard them mention Halloween.  Of course, she thought.  Today is Halloween.  Her friend was dressed up as a doctor for Halloween.  That made much more sense.  The one dressed in the doctor’s getup was smaller than the other girl. 
She watched as they walked down the hall.  She noticed Michelle placing her bag at the nurse’s station.
Hawkins strode to the nurse’s station and pulled out the bag.  She opened the bag and pulled out the uniform jumper.  She recognized it as belonging to St. Mary’s, a local catholic all girls’ school. 
Obviously, that girl was a volunteer here.  While the costume was cute and very realistic, she would have to suggest that she wear her candy striper uniform inside the hospital to avoid anyone mistaking her for a real doctor. 

Chapter 3.

The two girls were sitting at a table in the cafeteria. 
“So Shelly, do you think you will win the contest for best costume?” Melissa inquired.
“I don’t know.  But, if I can fit into the uniform you brought, at least I won’t be embarrassed by not participating.  I’m really more worried about just meeting some new people.”  Michelle was kind of looking off into the air as she spoke.
“Well you have a friend in me.  I am so excited.  You have really helped me define the direction for my life.  I love that you are a confident doctor and someone I can try to model my life after.  Maybe someday we can work together.”
“Well I think it will be a few years before we can work together.  Let’s work on getting you into a good school.”
They sat for a moment or two.
Michelle stood up.  “I am starting my rotation on the children’s wing tomorrow and I want to make a good impression.  You know how those nurses can be.  They think they do all the work and the doctors are useless.  I am trying to get the feel of the department today.”
Melissa responded, “I hear that there is a Nurse Hawkins up there.  Get on her good side and do whatever she says.  You should sail through your time on her ward.”
Michelle returned to the children’s wing.  She really didn’t need to be here today.  They had a day off between rotations.  Her new rotation assignments started tomorrow.  She always liked to take a look around ahead of time if she got the chance. 
Michelle was wearing blue scrubs and a white lab coat.  Her name tag was on the breast pocket, Dr. Michelle Carter.  She was really proud of that tag.  It seemed like a stamp of approval for all her hard work over the last few years.  She was wearing 2 ½ inch heels today since she was not really working yet.  She liked to wear heels whenever possible because she was naturally short at only a little over 5 feet tall.  Even her white work shoes were a style of tennis shoe that had a heel.  It was sort of hidden in the design of the shoe.
Michelle saw a nurse at the nurse’s station and decided to introduce herself. 
***
Nurse Hawkins noticed the return of the girl in the doctor outfit. 
“Hi, I’m Michelle Carter I’ll be working up here with you starting tomorrow.  I just wanted to introduce myself.”
Nurse Hawkins was sizing this young lady up.  “I’m Nurse Hawkins.  It’s nice to meet you.”  She paused.  “If you don’t mind my asking, don’t you think the heels are a little out of place for a doctor’s outfit?”
Michelle was caught off guard.  This was the nurse she had been told about.  She did not want to start things off on the wrong foot.  “I guess I should have worn my white soft soled shoes.  That would probably be more normal; right?”
“Yes that would be more appropriate. How can I help you?” Nurse Hawkins hated wasting time with these kids.
“I just wanted to look around and familiarize myself with the floor so I’d be more prepared tomorrow.
Nurse Hawkins thought maybe this one is trying a bit too hard.  “That’s alright.  But, don’t cause me any trouble.”
Michelle felt like a kid getting dressed down by the teacher.  She said, “I’ll just look things over and head out.  I have plans for later.”
Yes, thought Nurse Hawkins.  I know about your secret contest.  She also thought the nametag was a nice touch.  It gave a sense of realism to the costume.  She did sort of look like a doctor.
She looked at Michelle and said firmly, “Carry on, I have work to do.”
Michelle turned away feeling like a chastised child.  As she thought about it, she realized this was a problem.  One of the key lessons doctors learn is that they have to earn and demand respect from the nursing staff.  For women, this is harder than for men.  As she walked away, Michelle began to think about how she was going to change her relationship with this Nurse Hawkins.

Chapter 4.

Nurse Hawkins kept an eye on her new candy striper.  She was looking in a few of the rooms.  She said ‘Hi’ to a couple of the kids who were patients.  It looked like she might be a good addition to the group. 
A little later as Nurse Hawkins was leaving a patient room, she noticed Shelly walking into the nurse’s station.  It might be time to lay out the limits of Shelly’s new role. 
As Nurse Hawkins entered the Nurse’s area she called, “Miss Carter, could I have a word?”
“Of course, Mrs. Hawkins.” Michelle replied.
“First of all, my name is Nurse Hawkins.  It is not Mrs. Hawkins. I demand respect from everyone I work with.  I have earned it.  Second, when you want something from me you ask.  You will use please and thank you.  You ask to come into the nursing area.  There will usually be more nurses around.  This is our office.  Not yours.”
Michelle felt that she was being put down again.  She nodded to the instruction, but was trying to figure out a polite way to change their relationship.  At this moment, it felt like it was going in the wrong direction.
Nurse Hawkins continued, “You do not go through our things or look into private patient information.  There are laws regarding patient privacy and we take that very seriously at this hospital.  Do you understand?”
Michelle was stunned and quickly responded, “Yeah I get it.”
Nurse Hawkins voice stepped up in force as she took a deep breath, “You will talk to me with respect. No Yeahs or Nahs.  You will respond; Yes, Nurse Hawkins I understand.  Now DO YOU UNDERSTAND?”
Michelle was intimidated. This woman was bigger than her and she seemed really mad all of a sudden.  Michelle stammered, “Yes Nurse Hawkins, I understand.  I am sorry I did not respond in a respectful way.”
Nurse Hawkins appraised Michelle, “That is better.  Now finish up your tour and let me get back to work.”
Michelle felt like she was losing control.  She needed to figure out a way to reassert herself.  She went into the bathroom to think for a minute. 

Chapter 5.

Michelle decided that forcing a confrontation today would be a bad idea.  She would continue her tour of the department and get out of here so she could go to the party. 
Michelle went into the nurse’s station and read a couple of the charts.  She selected a patient and Michelle went into one of the rooms and talked with the child and her mother.  She introduced herself and asked a few questions.  She tried to provide some reassurance to the little girl and moved on to the next room.
Nurse Hawkins saw Michelle leave the nurse’s station and walk to one of the rooms down the hall.  She was talking to the patient and her family.  At first, Nurse Hawkins thought that was really nice.
Suddenly, she stopped.  That girl is dressed like a doctor.  She has a doctor name badge.  What kind of game is she playing with these troubled families?  Hawkins was worried now.   She had to figure out what this little minx was up to.
Nurse Hawkins walked down the hall and sidled up to the door outside of the room where Michelle was talking to a family. 
Nurse Hawkins heard Michelle telling the family that she had read their chart and that their daughter seemed to be progressing well.  She said she would have more involvement in their case in the coming days.
Nurse Hawkins could not believe this.  In all the years she had worked here, she had never had one of the child volunteers take their fantasies this far.  She was misleading this family into believing that she was an actual doctor.  The new Doctors were enough like kids.  But having a real kid trying to be a doctor was ridiculous. 
As Nurse Hawkins considered her new round of doctors and this little trouble maker, her anger quickly grew out of control.  She needed to get this problem under control immediately.  As she fumed, Michelle seemed to end her supposed consultation and moved to exit the room. 
Nurse Hawkins grabbed Michelle’s arm and said, “We need to talk; right Now!”
***
Michelle was ending her consultation and she felt she had connected with the mother and her daughter.  As she was leaving the room, Nurse Hawkins grabbed her arm and said they heeded to talk.  Michelle was caught off guard.  She was being dragged toward the nurse’s station. 
“What?  OK.”  Michelle tried to pull her arm free and walk.  But, the nurse held her arm in an iron grip.  She was almost dragged into the back of the nurse’s station. 
Nurse Hawkins anger was seething.  She was thinking about the inexperienced young doctors.  She was thinking about this crazy girl.  Her anger was turning to rage.  And, her mind and her anger were totally focused on Michelle. 
Suddenly, the nurse stopped and spun Michelle around.  They were looking at each other.  Nurse Hawkins was much larger than Michelle.  Michelle was looking up at the nurse. 
Michelle began to feel a little like a kid ready to be corrected.  She quickly realized that she needed to change their relationship.  This nurse needed to be put in her place.
Nurse Hawkins was having similar thoughts.  She believed it was time to put Michelle in her place. 
Firmly, Nurse Hawkins began, “Let’s get something straight.  Today, you are not a doctor working on this floor.”
Michelle thought it was a technicality.  But she realized she would not officially be working on this floor until tomorrow.  She nodded. 
Nurse Hawkins continued, “You said you wanted to look around.  But you have been in private areas behind the nurse’s station and I have no idea what you have gotten into.  Then I heard you talking to the patients.  I need you to empty your pockets.”
Michelle was caught off guard.  “What?  My Pockets?”  Feeling indignant, Michelle tried to step back, hitting a wall.  “I will not.  Who do you think you are?”
The nurse had positioned her so that her back was to a wall.  There was no escape.  Michelle tried to move away and hit the wall. 
Nurse Hawkins had a smile on her face.  Or, was it a sneer?
“Young lady, it is time we got some things straight.  I am the person in charge around here.  Not you.  Empty your pockets or I will.”
Michelle began to try to escape.
Nurse Hawkins grabbed her. 
“I guess we’ll do this the hard way.  I need to verify that you have not taken anything from the nurse’s station.  You have been in and out of here and there are drugs and other things back here.” 
Michelle reacted strongly.  “Let me go of you fucking bitch.  No one is gong to … Oww.”
Nurse Hawkins slapped Michelle.  Her reaction was instinctual.  It was an unexpected reaction to the young lady cussing at her.  “No one talks to me that way.”
Michelle was dragged over to a sink. It was clear the nurse was really mad.  As she was trying to get her thoughts together, Nurse Hawkins shoved a wet bar of soap into her mouth.  She scrubbed it back and forth across her teeth generating shavings and soap bubbles.  The bar was then pushed into her mouth.
“Don’t you dare take that soap out of your mouth?  I am so sick and tired of the insulting way youngsters talk to me.  How dare you talk to me like that?”  Nurse Hawkins was holding Michelle’s hands in front of her.
Michelle was flailing.  She was trying to get her hands up to her mouth.  She was gagging on the soap and trying to figure out how things had gotten out of hand.  The soap was wedged onto her teeth and her tongue was held down by the bar.  She could not move the bar of soap without her hands since her tongue was stuck.  Instead, she was sucking on the pungent bar of soap.  Her tongue was watering and increasing the effect of the soap.
Michelle suddenly felt her lab coat being pulled over her head from the back.  As this occurred, the nurse pulled it over her head but did not let her arms out of the sleeves.  Instead, she wrapped the coat around Michelle’s arms.  This made it easier for Nurse Hawkins to control her arms. 
Nurse Hawkins sat down in a hard backed chair near the desk. 
Michelle’s muffled cries were quieted by the bar of soap in her mouth. 
“Now little missy, it is time we got back to figuring out what your game is.  As I said, I need to make sure you have not stolen anything or gotten into things you should not.  Since you refused to empty your pockets like a good girl, I will search you myself.”
The nurse positioned Michelle standing next to her leg and held onto her arms with one arm.  With that, the nurse used her free hand to reach behind Michelle and whisked down the scrub pants to below her knees.  Michelle’s eyes went wide as she again began to thrash around.
Nurse Hawkins pulled Michelle across her lap and pushed her bundled arms under her far leg.  She then gave Michelle two very hard swats across her butt.
“That is enough of that.” She said firmly. “I will finish searching you and then we will make sure that you and I have a firm understanding of our relationship.”
With that Michelle’s pants were pulled off her flailing legs.  The nurse leaned on Michelle’s arms with her legs and held her on her lap with one of her arms.  She used the other arm to dump the contents of Michelle’s pockets onto the floor.
“Well nothing there in your pants pockets.” 
Nurse Hawkins noticed Michelle’s small silky panties adorned with lace on the legs.  Why do children have to wear such slutty cloths?  They certainly afforded no protection from the previous swats.  However, Nurse Hawkins was in a position to try and straighten this young lady out, she might as well start from the inside.
“This slutty underwear is inappropriate for working around my hospital.  From this day forward, I will whenever I see fit, inspect your underwear.  You will wear regulation underwear similar to that allowed with any good school uniform.  If I find you wearing something like this in the future, you can expect another correction session.”
Michelle felt her underwear being removed and again tried to scream.  Her hands were locked down.  She was swallowing and eating a bar of soap and some crazy woman was stripping her. 
“Now, I think it is time for us to come to an understanding regarding our relationship.  Don’t you agree?”
Michelle nodded thinking this would give her a chance to explain who she was.  However, Michelle was wrong.
Nurse Hawkins adjusted Michelle’s position on her lap and began to beat a pattern onto her bottom.  She varied location and switched cheeks regularly. 
Michelle was stunned as the spanking began.  No discussion.  No explanation.  Suddenly, she was being spanked. Not playfully.  This woman was serious.  The pain quickly passed her ability to control.  She was trying to get off of the nurse’s lap.  She was trying to scream.  But, she was quickly crying uncontrollably.  Her tears were streaming and her sobs were real.  She was still inhaling the soap but due to the pain, she was almost oblivious.  Michelle felt like a little child being spanked.  Her mind was a blur. 
Nurse Hawkins made sure her blows hit Michelle’s taught rear end, her thighs and her inner thighs throughout the spanking.  Everything was beginning to glow in a nice shade of red.  There were clear finger or hand patterns.  Nurse Hawkins was getting all of her aggression out of her system.  She was going to straighten out this child who was trying to pretend to be a doctor on her floor if it was the last thing she did today. 
Michelle was in a cloud.  She was being punished.  She would do almost anything to get it to stop.  Her entire focus was on stopping the pain. 
As Nurse Hawkins paused, she asked Shelley if she was going to be a good girl.
Michelle with no other option nodded and continued to cry.  She looked pleadingly up at the nurse.  The truth was Michelle still did not know what it was that she had done wrong.  But she felt reality slipping away.  She wanted to do whatever this woman wanted.  She was putty in the nurse’s hands. 
Michelle was breathing hard and heaving.  Her eyes and cheeks were red and puffy. 
Nurse Hawkins explained.  “Now Shelley, I’ll pause and we will see if you intend do be good.  Stand up here a minute so I can get you unwrapped from this coat.”
Michelle was still crying as Nurse Hawkins unwrapped her arms and pulled the coat free.  She set the coat aside and began to pull the scrub top over Michelle’s head.  Michelle began to balk, but a few quick swats got her to give in.  Michelle suddenly realized she was bare below the waist and moved to cover herself.
“Oh and of course we have to have the slutty bra to match the previously discussed underwear.” 
As Michelle looked quizzically at Nurse Hawkins, Her bra was unceremoniously unhooked and removed.

Chapter 6.

As Michelle covered her small breasts with one arm, Nurse Hawkins commented, “Why must you young ladies always try to build up what God gave you.”
Nurse Hawkins held Michelle by arms up near the shoulders.  She looked into her eyes.  “As you get older, your body will develop.  But I will not have you wearing these slutty clothes on my floor.  While you are working in my hospital, you will wear appropriate clothing. You will not try to excite my patients, especially not young kids on this wing.  Do you understand?”
Michelle covering her chest and crotch while sucking on the soap in her mouth just nodded. 
“So from now on Shelley, you can wear a bra sized for your chest or just a camisole.  You don’t really need a bra.  You can wear that along with your uniform underwear.  I would think the school uniform regulations would include such requirements.”
Michelle did not understand this discussion of the school uniform. 
Nurse Hawkins reached under the counter and pulled out the bag with the school uniform in it.  Dumping the contents on the desk, she found a pair of thick cotton child’s panties and a white camisole with Barbie on it. 
“Ah, you see.  From now on, you will only wear underwear like this.”
Michelle raised her eyebrows.  She tried to mumble ‘What’.  It came out as “whuu”?
“Listen carefully Shelley.  I am in charge here.  You and I are coming to an understanding.  I will not allow you to wear slutty underwear when working in my area of the hospital.  So any time I see you, I may just pull you into a corner to check your underwear.  Do you understand young lady?”
Michelle tentatively nodded.  She understood the directions.  But did not understand why this was happening.  She was sure that as soon as she could explain herself to this maniac, things would be better.
The nurse held out the panties for Michelle to step into.  Michelle slowly stepped into the panties.  Nurse Hawkins pulled the child’s underwear up and allowed the waistband to snap high up on Michelle’s waist.
Nurse Hawkins swiftly pulled the camisole over Michelle’s head.  It fit her chest firmly and compressed what little chest she had.  Michelle looked down at her nearly non-existent chest and was ashamed of her lack of womanly assets.  Why was this crazy woman doing this to her?
As Michelle was pondering her situation, Nurse Hawkins tucked her camisole into the top of her panties, like he mom did when she was in grade school.  And just as quickly, Nurse Hawkins was slipping her arms into the white blouse for the uniform.  The blouse fit but surprisingly was not loose.  It seemed made for Michelle.  A small uniform necktie was tied around the neck of the shirt.
Nurse Hawkins slipped off Michelle’s socks and replaced them with small white anklets.  She then tied on the classic leather brogues. 
Nurse Hawkins held up the plaid jumper style dress.  “Ah, I love the classic uniform of St. Mary’s school for girls.  I thought you would be wearing the skirt for the girls 7th grade and above.  But the classic lower school uniform is much more traditional.”
As Nurse Hawkins slipped the dress over her head, Michelle was trying to digest that the uniform she was wearing was for the St. Mary’s grade school students.  And worse yet, everything fit perfectly.
Nurse Hawkins pulled Michelle into the bathroom. 
“Now I am going to remove that soap from your mouth.  Your lips and mouth will be a little numb from the long sucking on the soap.  I expect that your words will be tempered following our discipline and discussion.  Will you behave?”
Michelle nodded.
The Nurse pulled the soap out of her mouth and handed her a paper cup.  Michelle filled up the cop and rinsed her mouth out several times. 
As Michelle paused, she looked in the mirror.  She saw a young girl with puffy eyes, red cheeks and swollen lips.  Her tongue was swollen making it hard to form words.  She looked like a kid that had been crying for an extended period of time.  She thought that was probably what should have been expected given the last few minutes. 
Nurse Hawkins put a small beret cap on Michelle’s head. 
“Come along dear.”
Michelle tried to pull back.  Her words were garbled because her mouth was swollen from the soap, “Can we thalk?”

Chapter 7.

 “No we can not.  I am done with you today.  You have disrupted my routine enough for one day.  I am through with you.”  Nurse Hawkins looked Michelle in the eye and asked, “You were planning to go to a party, right?”
“Wewll, yeth.  But…”
“No buts.  I have decided that instead of going in your doctor outfit, you will be a well disciplined student for Halloween.”  Then she added sternly, “NO BACK TALK.”
As Nurse Hawkins led Michelle down the hall, she stopped outside the patient’s room Michelle had visited earlier.
She looked Michelle in the eye and said, “First, we need to straighten this family out.”
Michelle was not sure what she meant.  She was feeling like a kid being paraded out for an apology.  But she did not understand.  “Wha do ewe mean. I …” 
She was cut off by a swat to her bottom.  The pain was intense and she tried to jump away. 
“Oh No you don’t.”
Nurse Hawkins pulled Dr. Michelle Carter into the patient’s room.  Michelle remembered having a good conversation with them earlier.  She hoped they had not heard what went on at the nurse’s station.  She was a bit embarrassed by her attire and tried to sort of hide behind the nurse. 
Nurse Hawkins began, “I want to apologize to you.  Today is Halloween and Shelley here was all decked out in her little doctor uniform and I fear that she let her fantasy go a little far with you earlier.  We decided that a disciplined student was a better outfit for Halloween.  Shelley, tell this family you are sorry for misleading them earlier.”
Michelle was stunned.  She was not Shelley.  She tried to explain, “Newse, Hawkwins, wha are ewe saying?  Ewe are ….”  Shelley’s words sounded like she was blubbering due to her swollen tongue and lips.  She sounded ridiculous.
Nurse Hawkins grabbed Shelley’s ear with one hand, twisting and pulling her up in front of the family.  She then delivered two quick swats to Shelley’s hind quarters.
“You will apologize young lady.  Now!  Or should we go back to my office?”
“Noo.”  Michelle was devolving into the student she appeared to be.  She was scared to death of a repeat of the spanking.  She decided to apologize and get out of here.
“I’n Sowwy.  I won’t do it again.  Pwease fowgive me.”  As Shelley, for that was who she was now, said the words, she felt she was losing any authority she may have had.  How would she work with these people or this nurse in the future?
Nurse Hawkins looked at the family.
“I guess we accept the apology.  But how can a hospital allow this to happen?  I want to talk to someone about this tomorrow.  Get her out of here.”  The mother turned to her daughter.
Nurse Hawkins, still holding her ear, dragged her out into the hall.
She stopped and looked at Shelley.  “Now Shelley, do we understand each other?  I don’t care how long you work her at my hospital.  You will wear the clothing we discussed as a reminder of today’s failures.  Got it?”
With her head lowered, she said, “Yeth.  I undewstant”  My God, she thought I sound like a little kid.  She just wanted out of this place.
Nurse Hawkins saw Melissa Carter down the hall. 
“Miss Carter, please come here.”
Melissa saw Nurse Hawkins standing with a kid from the St. Mary’s Grade School.  She walked quickly down the hall. 
“Miss Carter, your young friend Shelley has decided to go out for Halloween as a well disciplined child instead of as a slutty doctor.  Please take charge of her and deliver her to either the party or her parents.  I am done with her.”
Melissa stood open mouthed.  She stared at the little girl who appeared to be in sixth or seventh grade.  No, Sixth at most; or maybe fifth.  She has no chest and is puny.
She took Shelley’s hand and started walking down the hall.  Shelley was crying and Melissa put her arm around her.  As she looked over Shelley’s shoulder she could see the marks on Shelley’s legs where she had been disciplined.
Melissa wondered how she could have let herself be taken in by this person.  She had idolized her.  She led the well spanked little girl down the hall. 

Epilogue

The only thing Shelley knew was that when she went to work she would be wearing the regulation panties and camisole dictated by Nurse Hawkins.  Her big girl clothes might not really fit, but rules were rules.  Hopefully she could avoid another spanking.
Shelley left the hospital with Melissa.  Until they were in Melissa’s car, Shelley did not realize that she did not have her purse, keys or any identification. 

Without keys or id and with Melissa feeling betrayed, Halloween night was a disaster.  But that was another story.

5 comments:

  1. I love this story so much. Is there a sequel?

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  2. Among your shorter works, I consider this as the most perfect/complete.

    C. Lakewood once commented about Joe Doe's stories -

    "The pacing, the paragraphing, the twists and turns (sometimes surprising and often humorous), the tidy but "open" endings are all worthy of study."

    But the quote goes surprisingly well with this story and cannot be better described in one sentence. And I always wondered how the night went for Shelly.


    Anyway, I recently found that there was a sequel on the process (mentioned by you) and it has been 5 years since then. Any chance that the sequel is ready and we can read it?

    This is my email - 01asif02habib@gmail.com; if you want to drop a line. All the best.

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  3. I began a sequel but never got terribly far. I loved the way the story left her future open to imagination and I worried that by trapping her into my own that it would take away some of the fun others saw in it. While I may do more with it, it is not a near term project.

    Thanks for the note.

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  5. I know the blog is defunct, but I just love this story and had to say so.

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